My brother and I

Don't let us down am looking forward to this st ory

The adventure is fun of thrill, narrative is well-written and engaging! Overall this novel is definitely a fun and quick read! Only problem is it's still new, thus it's gon' b quite fresh! That's the upsize. Can't wait for more chapters and see what the story has in store for us!

Love the story so far .Quests and puzzles! :) Looking forward to reading more of your chapters. Wish i had more stones to vote with. Keep writing!

Sealed (Mostly irrelevant)

With a glance and straight,I found his weak point  the fight was rough and tough and the audience were concentrating really hard for the winner to be precise

Gea bersungut-sungut sebal saat memasuki gedung pencakar langit ini. Skyscraper berlantai empat puluh ini merupakan tempatnya bekerja. Dia memulai karir di perusahaan ini sekitar tiga bulan yang lalu sebagai sekretaris CEO yang paling terkenal dengan segala kesempurnaannya. Tampan, Rupawan, konglomerat, jenius merupakan sebutan yang paling banyak didengar. Bahkan dulu dia hampir menggemparkan sejagat pengusaha Ibu kota karena namanya terpampang jelas di majalah pesohor milik US. Di majalah Forbes itu dia mendapatkan nominasi sebagai pengusaha dengan penuh potensial dan talenta.

"Actually, yesterday afternoon, after I had heard the news that Shangyang Xiang Tian and Tieta had killed a Class 2 Magical Beast in the 3rd region, I personally rushed over myself to secretly watch them. Although those 2 aren't Saints yet, their combat abilities cannot be underestimated. Especially Shangyang Xiang Tian, with just a broken iron rod, he was pretty much invincible in the 3rd region. Not only are his movements incomparably fast, they are also extremely precise. His battle experience is not anything alike to a 15 year old youth's; on the contrary, it seems as if he's a person that has fought 100 battles already. The Class 2 Monster Cores in the two's hands were pretty much completely killed by Shangyang Xiang Tian alone. Tieta was simply involved in the fights."

"Sorry sir, but Ms Hermione asked me not to and you asked me to follow her command in your absence which didn't override to your original commands," Micasa answered quietly.