Loving Carter

It’s quite good, not much I can critique. Appreciate the story and beginning it’s quite unique. Also the writing quality doesn’t give me epilepsy reading it. It’s flows well and it’s immersive. Nice man.

This is a very good book and i enjoyed it so much. Thanks for the writing Mr.Author

Setelah informasi update mengenai konversi AP ke Credit, Lin memberitahu ke Bart dan Ardan, karena system di Super Soldier tidak mengizinkan melihat total AP jadi Lin tidak mengetahui berapa AP ardan, jika mengetahuinya, Lin mungkin akan shock. Tak lama setelah itu Ardan merasa dirinya cukup komunikasi dengan Bart, dirinya permisi mau pergi ke pusat perbelanjaan.

Even as Jeremiah paced by the window, he could hear the barking of the dogs go from sporadic to manic as midnight drew closer. He silently prayed to all the gods and goddesses he knew to let the eclipse pass faster. He was getting more and more agitated as the clock approached midnight.

"I'm afraid you might be a bit late for that," A voice said, the front door opening suddenly. "I have some things I would like to discuss with you."

He quickly said "But then it suddenly started glowing in my hand when it came into contact with blood in my hand that was caused by some branches when the monkey was swinging me. I fainted right after that and in the morning when I woke up the gem was not there and then when peered out from the trunk a guard near there saw me and that was how that whole incident ended. I never said anything about it at that time because I thought it as a dream but now I am really sure that it was real" He paused and then said "Today when I had collapsed, I woke up in a place that was real yet unreal like illusion but you can't tell the difference when you are there"

I put my phone back in my pocket and looked around the hallway. Where did Jess even go? I thought about it for a minute and wondered if I was Jess where would I go, but that didn't help me either. The problem was that I had no clue where Jess could have gone. This was the University of Alabama, it was a huge campus so there was no telling where she went or why, but I did get the feeling she stayed in this building.

"Exactly," Baron Frederick said as he placed down the quill, the sound reverberating within the stillness of the room.