Isekai Journey Of The Magic Archer

Hey bro, remember me? Anyway, this is a genuine review. I have read a few chapters I am in 5 or 6 but I want to read more. Really! I am not lying! This is good! However...
It's not great. Yeah... its not a novel that will come in no.1.
So, you have to work hard. But I must say this novel is wayy better than mine. You write better than me.. Just keep writing.. Don't Give Up. Pleaseee!

I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL TO ALL OF YOU.

I am jealous of you. You write so well. You write wayyyy better than me. There wasn't any long and boring info dumps like my novel. The MC seems genuine and well written. Still, you can never become too good. So I will give you some tips that might help you :

1. Read top novels in WebNovel (top 5)

2. Read real best selling novels like Sherlock Holmes and Harry Potter. (You can find their EPUB version online for free.)

3. Watch videos about how to show not tell. (You are already good at it still it will help you.)

4. Ask the top authors about some tips too.

5. Ask urself why isn't my novel getting the popularity I want. (Popularity as in comments, reviews, votes etc.)

6. Write, just write. Simple. Write to ur fullest. Wrong, bad, poor, unreasonable still just write. Trial and error is the best way to learn. No one is judging you. Heck no one even knows ur real name. So, just write. And when u wrote a million words u will see that u have come a long way. Just imagining this will make you get goosebumps right?

7. Believe in urself.

8. Love ur work if u don't, no one will.

9. I don't have anymore tips as I am also a newbie.

Life isn't easy. Just keep pushing and u will win. Ur novel is good and good things can't remain unhidden.

I believe in you. U can do it. And even if ur novel didn't do well u can always write another. U r not Shakespeare, right! No one even knows ur real name. So, just believe in ur self and push through.

I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL TO ALL OF YOU.

It’s not bad but I wouldn’t say it was good either,im on chapter 70 and one thing that sucks is that the author keeps wasting chapters on the family saying the same thing, they all act cringy/overboard when they never met the kid regardless if it’s family. Another thing is that the author must like writing beta male characters including the mc because every male character basically jusy gets dominated by their counter part with no struggle. The mom  is literally trying to restrict the mcs potential without even caring and using the excuse of his safety, she doesnt even ask the opinion of the dad or trust him with the kid. The dad just gets completely dominated, whatever his mom says he does and literally he never questions it

After 100 chapters novel become very stupid, author is greedy and he's trying to put a lot of stupid things maybe maybe the novel will be longer stupid author stupid author stupid author stupid author stupid author stupid author

I loved the story but there are too much of sentiments as it started to become cringey when the sentiment lines are coming up. Author, I get it that you want to show family love and all but please reduce some of family sentiments. I am not asking you to get rid of the sentiments from the story but just reduce some please.

Overall the story wasn't bad however the whole story line has so many sentimental nonsense going on making it so cringeee that it makes me sick, the story was also too generic however it was still a bit balanced at some point so it's still fine I guess....but the whole romance of the story feels like it was written by some old virgin ...*no offense author peacee xD*
I just didn't like the whole ‘sort of’ love at first sight related stuff..

I really liked the story till the end of first volume  .But it all went downhill from there  More than 50 chapters to describe 2 days of him returning back to his family  Then how he fall in love with a girl who is more than 120 years old in a single day and he is not even 12. So much many more things I find unnecessary . Also I find demons too powerful if just one marquis rank demon and do damage to all of the continent .

This novel story is very similar to beginning after the end

Its good but in the later chapter, there is too much inner dialogue, many POV for just single moment, wasting many chapter for the same information in my opinion