In Love With The Rich Man's Son

Nice novel, it's not very exciting but the world building is really bad, why the hell start from the bottom? The main character and the secondary characters remain mortal humans for so long that I got bored, the author focuses on the characters and building the family much more than the traditional plots and lore of the farming world, it's like a rural family of idiots.

The premise of the story is good, but to many adjectives are used for my tase. Every second  sentence there is unnecessary adjectives added to the text.

Over used story line making the beginning too soft the synopsis ain't attractive either and there hasn't really been any spark what so ever but not gonna lie your writing is good and there hasn't been any plot holes the system also seems chill as such I'll rate this a 4

-Asylum-

"Still going after launch codes?" Tony asked from the den.

I turn and run back to my room as fast as my shaky legs will carry me, but when I arrive the room is empty. The window is open, and Orion has left. I bolt to the window and look up. His constellation is still there, but it is faint in the light of the others. I can feel his strength, ebbing as the stars of his constellation flicker. Through our unique connection, I can feel his fear of death, his own heart aching with the pain of leaving, and it is too much too bear.

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?

Napakurap siya ng makitang pinitik pitik ng dalaga ang kamay nito sa harapan niya dahilan para matauhan siya.