I Became a Veteran Heroine in a Harem Story

The first ever apocalypse story by Fleeting Dawn! 🎉I only read 13 chapters but, it's already entertaining. The FL was very quick-thinking when facing the dangers that often came so suddenly. She also made use of her water ability and space well.There are some mysteries about FL's abilities. Her water ability was already powerful compared to her first life, also her space was so interesting and helpful unlike the usual warehouse-type space in this story.The author's writing is excellent. She portrayed the battle/action scenes well, also including the emotional ones in FL and the other characters. Lol I'm so glad when one of the supporting characters called out the green tea bich. That woman also didn't have the halo that made her being unconditionally loved/cared for by the others.I hope FL could avenge her previous life's death by tormenting the green tea bich slowly. Go go go!

I'll give it a five star before I start the real review.So, first of all, too few chapters to truly judge the book, but I'll tell you guys my view.Let's start with the plot: -Unlike the novels out there that just have the plots bent by the author's will, here it seems realistic.Characters: -Just like the plot, the character have reactions like a normal human would. So, this part is a check as well.World building: - Can't say anything about it right now since not much of the world had been disclosed.Now to the main thing - Grammar: -To be honest, it's not that good.It breaks the flow, and the words are in a mess.So, I will say, it's bad.Overall: -If the grammar was better, then the story would've been more engaging, but that doesn't mean that it is not like that right now.It is good.The grammar part is a let down, but the other points make up for it.In conclusion - You should try reading it once.

Jae Kyung sighed as she's mentally sobbing. For the love of her favorite chocolate Pepero, she was just got dragged in the situation. Blame her adrenaline rush.

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As Avalon finished her explanation and disappeared back into my grimoire, both me and the magic king sucked in a wave of cold air, and our eyes grew comically wide.

The two-pointer bots? Melee mashers, a mere sock puppet before the Pale Nail! =Great Slash= shut them up real quick.

"It's Xiāo Líng. I had just finish arranging my staffs and thought of having some fresh air as I see you getting bullied. But you're actually strong, what's your name by the way "Xiāo Líng replied

The screen read " Please take a seed from the chest and plant it. Planting herbs will result in an increase in cultivation Points. Cultivation points can be viewed by thinking "Status." The another screen appeared.