Hydro: Bite

Nice, romance...my favourite🥰🥰😘already hooked

     They interrogated us, examined us as they want. Who the hell think they are?

A Momo with a rope on the corner of his head, a small boat on the other end of the rope, was seen marching fast to cocoyasi village.

"Ahh..maaf saya belum memperkenalkan diri saya adalah Nindy Lestari saya adalah ketua OSIS SMA 1 senang berkenalan dengan mu" sambil menenggokan wajah nya dan menutup sebelah mata nya dia mengatakan itu .

However he was there, Kenpachi as they decided to call him. His mother died giving birth to him, and his father died at the hand of a saiyan named Paragus. He was an orphan but they would take care of him, all the Tuffles would raise him to be their new leader. They needed him, yet they didn't know that Kenpachi wasn't just a baby.

"I'm so sorry. But I still want to live and see my brother…."

Starts strong with a reasonable protagonist and setting. He’s not getting everything handed to him and he’s not a reckless fool. However, in the end of the second volume and the beginning of the third, i.e. around chapter 300, he starts getting everything. Even stuff he didn’t know he wanted. I’m ok with that every so often but for the next 100 chapters he becomes completely passive yet grows faster than ever. It seems to me the author couldn’t come up with a good reason for the protagonist to grow so they had to take away their autonomy to get anywhere. Not to mention the path they’re taking to get the power is completely different than anything before.Also the relatively reserved cautious protagonist suddenly joins an established group way to quickly. Suddenly becoming life and death friends in just a couple of days.

I really like the concept of the story. The novel is interesting and intriguing with the character portrayal which is well designed with interlinking relationships making it humorous and creative. Characters are sketched out finely tallying to the requirement of the plot. I like reading from every genre and particularly fond of romance not overly excessive but a little bit is okay, your story even though didn't have those but still is very much likeable. Some typos popping here and there needs to be kept on check.