Gradual Change

wow your writing is good, I honestly like this kind of story I'm so excited and looking forward to seeing what will happen between Billy and Artur

Lor que no me gusta que hicieron por qué cambiaron el. Om re de la personaje Edna por flame    , lo que me gustó es que el prota salvará a la espíritu  además me molesta que también cambiarán el nombre del espíritu

some clarification regarding Mc of this novel. if you're looking for smart or cunning, or jack all of trade MC, then this novel may not be for you. you can proceed with your search and leave this section.that's the warning now it's for the clarification.I have been reading a lot of complaints saying the mc is dumb or idiot. stop with your twisted logic guys, if someone is not smart it does not mean he's an idiot or dumb. I never created the MC to be smart, he just, a dude who never finished his middle-school and has been fighting on the street for almost half of his life. that's basically the mc's background, a street thug who talks by his fist. Drop your high expectation for him to be cunning or something else.does the mc will change in the future? yes, of course, there will be character development for him. He will change as the story goes on.My idea of the Main Character is not someone perfect in everything, but someone who is good at one thing and uses that thing to the top. I have even an idea to use a disabled as the Main Character. anyway, In this case, the Main Character is good at fighting and he will fight all the way to the top. that's it.if one day, I make a smart main character, he would never be strong, but he just uses his smart brain to solve everything which is extremely hard to create (at least for me, it's hard).That's it, while I am here, the chapter's length is around 1200-2000 words, so sometimes you will feel the chapter is long and sometimes short.

And all that glitters is gold

"Younder?"

"The point? Oh, whats the point, she asks. The point, Juniper, is to have fun, which you seem to have been doing SO much lately." Her words are heavy with sarcasm. I just look at her. She stares right back- until the glasses that were so precariously balanced slip off her nose and hit the ground with a crack.

Yani cerró su libro, un portal apareció a sus espaldas… Yami salió de este.

Gohan:oh it's been a few years