Extra's Death: I Am the Son of Hades

As the author, I'll shamelessly give myself 5 stars.

Opening is quite outstanding. Characters are pretty decent too just lacking some fillers and emotions... Hope you'll work on it too best of luck from big brother.

Heads turned when Kim walked down the hall.Her incredible long legs and of course her outstanding clothes caught everybody's attention.But it was her prowling , graceful stride and the light of vibrant energy in her face which made the attention linger. she lifted the public phone off the hook and punched in the number 'James?

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb

And we could all use a little change

Narinig ko ang pagbuntong hininga niya. 'Di nagtagal ay umupo siya sa tabi ko. Napatingin ako sa kamay niyang humawak sa braso kong may hawak na brush.

its a windy day, as if every thing is working against Lucy. it all stated when the love of her life found out she was 3month pregnant.          " Lucy you know I can't marry you, I told you form the start" duke said, while he pushed her away with a disgusted expression. "babe you said you love me and we will be together for ever" she cried but he turned and picked up his jacket which was on the chair in the room. he put his hands into his breast pocket got some dollar bills and dropped it on the bed, "that's 500dallars get reed of that thing and call me when you back to yourself"  he started working towards the door and stopped he look back at delicate beauty on ground still crying her heart out. "you know what! this would have been a sweet day. next time wait ontill we have made love before you give me bad news" he said and left the room. with the bang ! of the door she could feel her world Sheather into million pieces then the fear of the unknown set in as she fainted.

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