DEATH:When I became human

Hello everyone, writing this review for another event.

really an intriguing novel with well twisting and explained plot can't wait to see how it unfolds 👌👌👌

This author's ideas are just insane! Mostly referring to chapter 2 but damn, I just hope more chapters start releasing

She sneered. I bet he's not actually thinking about my safety. He was actually thinking about his reputation's safety. What a load of bull.

"Eeep!"

"what you went using Chakra" asked Kiba surprised "yes I didn't know the rule didn't apply here" Naruto said, and Kiba passes the ball back to naruto and  3 2 1 Kakashi blows the whistle and Naruto attacks these time applying Chakra to his feet and dribbling the the dafence as though they were standing still " what the hell I didn't see him" was the collective thoughts of the defenders while Kakashi saw the whole thing and thought " damn that kid is fast" back to the field is one on one neji vs Naruto " just like how granny taught me how to control Chakra I will use super strength to score as Naruto shoots and the ball gets an aura of a fire fox going straight to the goal post and neji catches it only to be overpowered and it scores"there is complete silence "yes I did it celebrated" Naruto " now we have found the playmaker" stated a smirking Kakashi " damn it I have to train more and master the rotation before the tournament" neji thought " wow did u see that Naruto is the second guy to score against neji, sasuke being the first" exclaimed Sai.

Except the patrols.

-- For translations, two chapters a day is a great speed. More than that seems sloppy.