Crossing Worlds - Wyatt Lykensen

First of all, I have to say that I thought the story was going to be good, but it feels great to see a work of this caliber. Please note that I am doing this novel review after 20 chapters.When blacksmithing is involved in any story, the story can already hook me and finding a story like this is enough to elevate the novel outline.The main character managed to attract me because he was quite interesting. Personally, I like to read about main characters with outstanding and incredibly evil personalities, so it is a good thing in my eyes to love such a main character.I can't say much about World Building, personally, I can't say much about it as I think it will unfold like tree branches as it progresses, after all, as I said, after reading only 20 chapters, I thought this story deserved a review.I couldn't help but smile, especially when I saw the message of Edward, the NPC we saw at the beginning, I hope we will be able to see more of him because the author gave him an interesting task and had him complete it in his first appearance.So, all things considered, it would be completely ridiculous not to give this novel 5 stars. Of course, this is my opinion.

Great Novel! The characters are well written an feel pretty real, they dont feel like cheap cardboard. The only issue i have with this which is a personal one and not one most people would have is the main character. Hes just simply not strong enough. Dont get me wron his progression in both strength and character have been great, but ive read many novels with the same premise so its gotten kinda boring for me. Im half tempted to write a fanfic on this where everything is the same just the Mc is absolutely Op like Gojo Satoru levels of Op. I think the interactions between the Mc and the other characters would be mega funny. Like Liyana threatens to kill him for being with another girl and he just tells her she cant and that shes weak. Itd be funny as hell.

Love the concept👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌Keep it up 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

"No!" he shouted at the creature with such force that it recoiled.

"Didn't you hear, Hana-chan came here to see Saito-kun!" Another one whispered but his voice were loud enough to be heard by Hana.

In an alternate Earth, children started being born with strange powers and abilities. The governments of the world tried to hide these people until they could find an explanation for these occurrences; but as the birthrate of these people continued to grow, and the world itself began to change, it became harder and harder to hide their existence. Eventually, the world learned of the truth and they were formally called 'enhanced' humans. However, people are afraid of the unknown, so these enhanced humans were ostracized, discriminated, hated, and feared.

He smirked widely. "My, you do know all the Heir. Very well then, come with me."

I regret coming here and listing her story was really heartbroken I felt her pain.. she was crying. ..