Bruised Knuckles

just loving this book and drama 😁 both .The character and plot is great

Pretty cool. Ilike the characters and the plot. Both are really cool. This novel has a lot of potential so i'm looking forward to reading it more

I get headcache, my head ... my head is spining and what i seing is just a colorfull thing, red, blue, pink, green, it's all what I saw. And ... something weird happen.

So much to do, so much to see

She sit beside Kimj.

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I gave full marks to the story, but I am dropping at the 3rd Arc due my personal preferences.  The writing quality is very good with minimal mistakes that are few and far between.  Author keeps the reader in the dark about the story so as things happen they are fresh and satisfying.  The things that got me turned off enough to stop are things most readers are happy with. 1. The constant line " I have to get stronger" is rammed down the readers throat sometimes multiple times over these small chapters.2. The plot of him hiding his strength while trying to play both a strong character and the weak character around the same characters is one thing I myself have trouble reading for a prolonged time.  For me there comes a point the drama to do so is an annoyance and it loses its appeal.  Again most readers like this and accept it whole heartedly.3. Because of his dual personality as weak and strong it makes most of the story just himself so it turns into inner monologue after inner monologue. Sometimes you get whole chapters that are an inner monologue.  The monologues are well written and do add some to the story, but for me they are just too frequent.  I didn't get far enough to see if or when Rey has a character growth as we are still only a couple months into the story.Overall very good story, just a few thing that affect me more than most, but keep up the good work.

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