Transience · Resilience

A book has great potential. But some parts feel stiff.And pacing is good but it could be better, Other than that the world building is amazing.The characters are developed well, the party was flesh out just in 5 chapters.

Here is my review about Maiden Houdini:Worldbuilding: The worldbuilding is quite blend between magic and modern world which is I think it's quite alright. However, I do like the antagonistic group treated Maiden Houdini as the threat here which is quite nice direction. My suggestion is to flesh out the world more to make it more interesting.Characters: For me the characters here are enjoyayable especially with the main Character, Maiden Houdini. I liked Madame Houdini as a character as she has a quite charisma and quite a good escape artist too with using her tricks and wits. For other characters, I think they are okay for now, just needed to flesh out them more. Writing: I like the writing of this world with a detailed description about the world and the character attire. I also the action scene in this book which is quick, but still quite okay to be follow.Overall, this is a nice book to read and I would recommend it

"I don't need to know you to see that." Hoseok was only inches away from him. His eyes were locked on the window while Yoongi's were on him.

Bulat knew this was bad but there was no solution right now. Wave cried also after knowing the very country he had been working had been killing millions of people for no reason. He began to question if it was right of him in the first place to even work for the Empire. Guilt filled his heart and knew he had to do something about it. Kurome saw her Nii-san and Nee-san lose themselves in guilt and anguish while all she could do was watch on. Seryu cried and vowed to herself to enact Justice upon the Empire.

This book is really unique and interesting, the concepts in the world are being revealed at a steady paste where you don't get large dumps of info, but know enough at each time to understand what's going on and to anticipate more chapters. Just give it a try, you won't regret it

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why wouldn't i give my book five stars? you think I'm stupid?

Interesting read✅No grammatical errors.✅The main MC is great.✅The story looks really interesting.✅Looking forward for more chapters. ❤️ Keep up the good work 👍