The One You Cannot Escape ( On Hold Until Further Notice)

I just nodded, because it really sound interesting. Who knows?

"What a good idea, you know you are going to die, so I might as well drag on the fear of dying, besides, I want you to watch your precious village go up in flames, along with the screams of your people." Reginold said coldly.

Three seconds and she spotted the master of such vile beast. He's cornering Yui on the side of the wall. With his looks she kinda know that he's the villain. Bai Shin Lin called Xia to summon an arrow. Their distance from the hero and her are massively too far. It would take time to run from there and by that moment the villain will immediately make a move on them. Long distance attack is a best course of action since she needs to separate the hero and the villain.

The city was very large and hard to navigate but Mal knew his way around I could remember some of the streets as well "this way!" Mal yelled at Catherine she was looking at some assorted treats "I can take as long as I want!" she yelled back. She picked a few things and we continued through the city. I heard someone call my name and a man around my height walked up to me "who are you?" I asked he just smiled

See, Dragonfly spread a second perspective of how miserably Dragon lost before he earned his nickname. Unlike the popular story, this one didn't seem to get old.

Oneka-senpai and Mia-san were standing in front of the setting sun. Her silhouette appeared before me. The wind kicked up Oneka-senpai's hair. She stared at me with a deadly glare. Uki-chan opened her eyes when she realized that I didn't kiss her. She looked at Oneka-senpai.

"My Queen, it was this commoner's fault. This commoner thought you were kidnapped, and have no choice but to fire." All of them kneel down and bang their head on the ground. Queen instantly boiled in anger.

The revoked a star from the writing quality is simply on grammar, and a few spelling mistakes. Some of your sentences are a little choppy, but other than that well done. I'm not sure on your stability in updates, so I just gave it a 5 as to not retract from your overall score. The story development is quite good! I really enjoy how the powers are presented and explained, and how in depth it goes. The character is well rounded, though in my opinion he is a little stupid :> Still, I gave you five stars because personal opinion shouldn't result in a retraction of a star. Through the chapters I read, it is very difficult to get a clear view of what is around the MC. I think describing the area more would help with that! It's not too bad though, so I only retracted one star. Well done :>