The Merchant of the Devil

An excellent adventure so far Raiwan is a unique character

This book is one of the best things I have read this year. The author has a way of crafting lifelike 3-dimensional characters that is awe inspiring. Keep up the good work.

5 star for everything. I love the characters and their different dynamics. The world building is also very brilliant. Can't wait to see how this unfolds. Great work

Read up to chapter 28 so far it’s a good book but need some polishing you have a lot of repeat paragraphs and not everything needs a description example main character says something and next sentence is low but sharp tone. I would get it if it was every once in a while but it’s after every conversation there’s no need for that

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This very amazing for a bunch of middle school students

I like this book. good job💯👍. update more chapters

"Time travelers? Really?" Gohan asked curiously and partially in awe.