The Elder Divine Sage's Reincarnaion

Love it! I'm not into these kinds of stories but I love the way you write this! and the plot intrigues me! keep it up!

has potential but the grammar is terrible.first chapters seem to be writen in a rush with not much thought put into them.story so far is just so so.hope the author improves.

Hi everyone, I have created a new story exploring the realm of gods and mortals. I hope you will enjoy it, and I welcome your suggestions and reviews.

The man laughs again, a little differently from before and with some uncertainty. Maybe he has a laugh for each situation? "My daughter, you are so funny!" ...Wow that didn't sound fake at all. "You're engaged to the Crown Prince, of course! In fact, we're meeting your fiancé and the King next week!"

Na luta contra Thomas, Heitor perdeu tudo o que tinha e o que teria em sua vida, seu rosto, seu saco, sua dignidade, sua mulher, seu reino, seu trono e seu nome, Heitor só sabia de uma coisa, ele iria se vingar de Thomas e seria mil vezes pior.

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"well I wanted you to have fun and it's not that bad" I say with a big smile on my face

Nag hanap na ulit ako ng panibagong trabaho.