The Eight Campione

I just  read  chapter one and now  just found myself writing  a review  🤭 keep up with the good work Author 👍

the world building is ok, we haven't explored much for now and I don't find anything really problematic, it updates regularly so there's that. characters for now aren't that good other then the mc who feels slightly better, the plot is quite intriguing as the premise is repeated reincarnation in the same world, no flaw for now. but the quality of writing is not good, randomly the gender change from he to she, the name of the martial arts change from one to another etc etc, it feels like a bad translation, in dire need of editing.

"YESSSsss FRIIIIITZZZZZZZZZZZ I COOOMMIIIINNNGGG SUCKKEEEEERRR !!!!!!!!!!!!!"

And all that glitters is gold

"Mhm, good. You have been careful while hunting in the forest now, haven't you?. Your fascination with the spirit beast is a little disconcerting."

- Kapag di sadyang nai-play ang team song niyo hindi ka na nalulumbay

When Wushu looked towards his grandfather he could see that he was strong there he stood a man that was at least 6'5 in height black hair tied up red eyes a scar across his chest he wore a simple robe with a wine gourd at his left side and on the right side his sword Wushu's evaluation of this man was one simple word "Warrior" uttered Wushu under his breath.

tittle(s):first and only parasite