The Demoniac Hero

The story has amazing development and promises to have great potential. Not your typical kind of hero, the characters are well-written. The quality is well maintained throughout the chapters.

I'm actually a fanatic otaku who likes maids more than having three meals a day. And I only read books related to maids. Also, I only visit maid cafes. Of course, I also collect maid figurines. I play games which feature maids and it turns me on so much. Then I'll wear the maid uniforms and jump in joy.

I’ve only just began this book up to ch 37. The world building is very interesting 5/5 and the first chapters are great but the more you read the worst it gets everything seems very forced and the author doent know when to stop the internal monilog and explain the subject form a 3rd person pov. The parents starts off has being very bad parents and neglecting the mc but it seems the author suddenly changes his mind. I do think this story has potential if the author starts fixing his mistakes and stop making everything sounding so forced. Not worth coins but I do think you should read this on a free website.

Read up to 10 chapters. Not my type of novel ... So I'm gonna drop it but 5 stars cos Author seems to be know his stuff.....

I read to chapter 60 for a reference point: Writing quality is good with what seems to be stable updates. Author may want to use a thesaurus to add more flavor to his text though. World building for both in game and the MCs world is progressing albeit slowly. Author needs to correct some errors in early chapters with the MCs lvl and maybe talk more about the games login times because I was left confused. Don’t think this one is for me right now but I hope the author keeps at it for his readers

You gotta be a special type of stupid to create a novel about "GHOSTS" but have him in a human form most of the time. The amount of failure that you have to pull just to screw up your whole novel by not even making use of the name... Like I get that you didn't want to write a good novel, but you didn't have to make it almost as terrible as those novels where the mc turns into something else but hates it so he instantly ruins it by getting a human form, Wait that's exactly what you've done here, you made a failure of a novel and now you use a human form because you had no idea how to write a novel about a ghost. Great job author, I try to be respectful to most authors but you just don't deserve it because you ruin your novel, make the readers wait through your terrible plot, and somehow find a way to ruin a topic that isn't really written about thus giving you so many different ways to write it. So for anyone wanting to read this, you might as well look for a different novel about a danny phantom at this point. I don't think many people here even read 1 chapter since this novel got the deserved 4.09 stars(Minus the 1 star I'm giving you) so for any of those poor fools thinking about reading this, don't.

"Hmm, there are a few who know more than I." Odin admitted, his eye flickering to Naruto, "It seems his return was fortuitous indeed."

"Did you start him in business?" I inquired.