The Dangerous Ex-Wife

Shameless first review here, please let me know what you think of the novel

"Hey [Failed genius], HUGE congratulations on publishing your first book! I'm beyond thrilled for you!Your hard work and dedication have finally paid off, and I couldn't be more proud of you! Your book is going to inspire and captivate so many readers.Now, I have a special request for you... In your next book (because I know there will be many more!), can you please add a character named after me? It would be an absolute honor!Once again, congratulations on this incredible achievement! Can't wait to read your book and celebrate with you!"

The story is decent but the author just rewords the same thing in different ways and repeats whole scenes from different prospectives with almost no changes on how the scene is perceived. Which just makes you feel like you’re constantly reading filler and makes the story progress come to a snails pace. 90 chapters in and he just face slapped 2 women from his past (in the progress of a 3rd) with 0 progress forward yet and 0 new encounters or connections. This story has a lot of potential but im hopping off this train here.

I was honestly gettin goosebumps just halfway thru the chapter , it was a really suspenseful beginning and a great way to start the story , im really invested in this and cant wait to see where the story goes and how the world building is gonna be and also I’m eager to see what the author does with the power system

The novel is really enjoyable and is updated regularly. I appreciate it, good work author.

"I'm not that stupid," he cackles, his laugh makes me uncomfortable, like he just made a joke that nobody really gets, "you'd do anything for, her." He says 'her' like it's a piece of rubbish on his pathway to victory. And to be honest, I think I am.  He moves his arm and aims the gun towards me, "I know you can't touch a ghost unless they want you to, so... if I must put my daughter in danger to win. I will," I hear the click, and like lightning he pulls the trigger.  

Meski penampilannya biasa dan tenang, tangannya yang putih jade seindah daun pegas, sangat lembut hingga tampak tanpa tulang. Dia bertelanjang kaki dengan sepatu rumput, tidak mengenakan kaus kaki apapun, memperlihatkan sepasang kaki yang seputih salju, sangat indah sehingga bisa menyilaukan. Jubah budayanya yang putih itu luas dan lembut, tanpa setitik debu di atasnya, menyembunyikan sebagian besar tubuhnya.

Both Kazuki and Kaede snapped. They started spouting nonsense. And started walking toward each other.