Serendipity's Collision

This is my first work, but I'm open to Criticism please feel free to give suggestions or opinions I will try to work harder for every readers to enjoy my novel

[Shameless Author] (*´∀`*) The story is very short. I made sure to compact mystery, drama, and fluff. This was honestly a practice book for me as I just wanted to finish a book.This book was basically telling me that it's possible to finish a story <3

Just here for the fp. Story plot is good.

"There are so many things that contradict with each other; it doesn't make any sense at all.

However, this usually happens with the truth of nature and disappear. Very few, are disabled in this. And very few are blessed with love, care and respect and I fear she does have this.

"Of course Grandpa, please follow me. I'll take her there. "Jeff answers as he drops his tools and you follow him.

"Wait. That person is running from something, lets hold off for a moment

The translation ruins the story, and even if it was written in perfect english the interactions and MCs personality are absolutely horrendous 💀 everything and anything that takes place makes me cringe