Separated Sands?: Authors Conquest

Everything W nice Keep it up and nice poetry

Sabot stared at Joven blankly without saying

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After Lillian finished her conversation, Marcus walked over to her. "Lillian, who're you talking to for so long? Is it Aunty Tang? What's it about? Are they back in town?" Although, he had overheard their conversation earlier, he wanted to double confirmed what he had heard.

He didn't stop until he was right in front of the shiny grey object. It was like nothing he had ever seen before, it was round and reflective, when he hesitantly placed his hand on the surface of it, it felt smooth and cool. He put his face right against it and sniffed it, it had no smell. Just as he was about to lick it, he felt a sudden sense of danger and he abruptly jumped backwards and scurried up the branch of a nearby tree, gazing down tensely.

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Very impressive work! The setting is very interesting, and a relief to see the MC is always clever and thoughful. Please keep uploading it!!