Search For The True Laws

It seems a bit slow at first, but I think that the  plot is solid along with the character design and I hope to see more improvement in Arc 2

Life of the Strongest Transmigrater is a unique take on the transmigration and cultivation genres, bringing a fresh spin to the often-trodden path of "ordinary person becomes overwhelmingly powerful." In this story, Lin Tian, the protagonist, finds himself transmigrated into a world filled with cultivation, where he's bestowed with an overpowered system that makes him invincible in every way imaginable. With the ability to refine pills at the Great Dao level, craft weapons that can defeat god-like beings, and even bend reality with his words, Lin Tian quickly becomes a figure so powerful that even the gods and demons tremble in his wake.

Ciao for now

Here,  the first sight of the fields:

The crowd ran, chased by the body who the gathered over, trampling the ones that were to slow.

Tapos iiyak iyak sa huli.

But the moment we appeared in the new world after being in the fog, I felt it, the same cold aura that I felt before that white figure appeared, and this time it was like it was coming from everywhere albeit not as potent and almost faint, thus I opted to hide deep inside and hide my presence and the orb's because in case of that white figure appears, it might not necessarily realize that the kid got the orb as that white figure never seen the suit so it may not know it, in fact that white figure might never know as the way the kid uses his powers and abilities is completely different than how his older counterpart did, not to mention the quality and quantity of the produced energy and how efficiently it is used, honestly it is like the kid was born for the orb albeit it can also be because of his fear of getting hurt should he mishandle the use of the orb, true the chances are slim of the white figure appearing and more so realizing that the kid assimilated with the orb but better be safe than sorry, as I don't like taking any chances, I don't want to be thrown into a dark hole again and certainly I don't want to know death again either.

Qing'er bit her tongue lightly and spat some blood onto the flower. She tried her hardest to think about Mu Bai while she held the flower.