Runes of the Infernal Sorcerer

Overall, it's a good story so far. Personally, it's a bit too fast-paced for me, but im aware a lot of readers enjoy that, so it isn't a negative objectively. Shes overpowered as heck, author is touching on some interesting themes i certainly didnt expect which is always nice to see. Overall well done and I can definitely see the story getting up there in popularity. 👍

I love the character development so far and the pacing of the story this is also one of the few stories I found on this app that doesn’t have grammar errors every five minutes so I want to say good job to the author for that can’t wait for more chapters

have 4 phases of life, just like

I stood up and gathered my belongings preparing to leave when I felt a tap on my shoulder. I turned around and saw a boy that was HOT but not as hot as the other boy. "Hey my name is Tyler" he said. "Hey, I'm Leah" I said. "Your beautiful Leah" he said. "Thank you, your cute yourself" I said. He smiled and asked "Who's class do you have next ?" I checked my schedule and said "Math". "We have the same class, I'll escort you." "Ok, thanks" I said. As we were about to walk out of the classroom I saw the other boy and he was giving a death stare to Tyler. That's weird. We walked to Math class and picked our seats. Tyler sat to my right leaving an empty desk on my left. That's when the other boy sat in it. He had a bad boy vibe. Hot. Dangerous. Like he just doesn't care about anything. He looked at me and said "Hey I'm Jay". "Hey I'm Leah" I said. He looked in my eyes and gave a sexy grin. That's when a girl came up to him and said "Jay are you still having the party ?" "Yes Kayla" he said, not bothering to look at her. She looked at me and said "Hi I'm Kayla". I said "Hey I'm Leah". She said "Leah your pretty. You should come sit with me and my friends at lunch". I said "Ok, that sounds nice." She smiled and walked away. The teacher walked in and started teaching, so I started paying attention and taking notes. At the end of class Jay stopped me and said "Hey Leah, I'm having a party at my place Friday night. Do you want to come ?" I smiled and said "Sure Jay." "Great, I will send you the address" he said handing me his phone. I put in my number and gave it back to him. "I will text you tonight" he told me. "How do you know I'm going to text back ?" I said. "I don't. But it's worth a try. See you later sunshine" he said before walking off. He called me sunshine and my heart skipped a beat.

James got a bit depressed when he saw Brutal Faith disconnect. Although he wouldn't admit it, he very much so liked the feeling of killing in one hit. It was something refreshing, not having to wack something too many times to kill it.

Walking to get the door she could already sense that something is wrong.....yeah.....something is wrong. Her conscience is telling her to stop. She want to stop but her body was moving on its own as if she was being controlled. Her hand held the handle of the door, moving out the safety lock she twisted the knob. Opening the door she saw that no one is present besides her, she looked at the dark hallways trying to figure out who's that idiot who decided to ring the bell this late at night but found none. Cursing, she went back and closed the door activating all the safety locks. "Damn that f*cking idiot, what came in his mind that he decided to ring my doorbell at this kind of hour..." there was a tap on her shoulder, swatting it away she continued. She's now the idiot who's talking to a door. "...ruining my mood, I hope he/she trip on the road, stumble on a crossing..." again there was a tap on her shoulder, swatting it away again. "....get hit by a dump truck so he could be severely injured to the extent that his/her face was disfigured....." Tap tap tap ".....become crippled, or worst—to die and go to hell...hell..."

• Eye of Weakness

He was exerting all his prowess in one go, he was not planning to break his promise with Bertolt and Laura for who knows what will happen to him base from the warning he received.