Reborn As Dante

Noobs, listen to your big bro. You have managed to come and read this MASTERPIECE. Thank your mom and dad for giving you birth🥸

it’s interesting, but not perfect. The story has action and mystery, which I like, and the main character feels real,The world-building is very detailed,  The dialogue is good, but sometimes the characters talk too much when action should happen.

the title sounds exciting. I might  really  enjoy  it

Now the battle actually begins. I dodged his attack and countered it with a punch of my own. I hit him in the face on his left. He backed off while brushing his ached cheeks. He turned at me and muttered, "Heh, as expected from a boxer."

They continue to walk between crates around and talked for a while but alexander was nervous as a fish on the land.

Present.

He waited until he was sure she was gone, checked both ways down the corridor after a minute then locked his door. He stared at the cellphone for a moment. It had to be the most expensive cellphone in the history of the world, but it was worth every penny. It was completely untraceable. No one knew he had this phone except Edith. Even the girl she'd gotten it from wouldn't know that Edith worked for him. As long as Edith hadn't lied and leaked the number to anyone, it was perfect for him.

They should just do us all a favor and take this book out behind the shed and put it out of it's misery! This books update schedule is atrocious and the story has totally gone from a 9.0 to a 2.0 max.