Re: Desolate Era (Naruto X DE)

this novel has great potential , the author focuses more on the relationship between the family and building their characters, it's good only sometimes I forget the age of the fl since she REALLY acts childish ( especially with that God fairy ...) and sometimes naive ... i really hope her character develops fast another point that  I appreciate this novel for is that the face slapping and schemes . the ideas and revenge is well written and very logical.the novel is yet at the baby stage and sure it will be one of the great gems in this site with great ideas and improvement .thank you author 🫡🫡

Nice! It’s superb! I’m really enjoying its thrilling world of the mafia—full of intrigue and excitement! In love with mafia, action, espionage, crime. Then start reading this novel. It has its ups and down but it's worth it in those categories( mafia, action, espionage, crime)

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A flicker of fire burst out of the weapon and right towards Mesa. Mesa, instead of dodging or trying to protect himself, just stood there and smiled looking at the attack approach him.

I grinned at  the "saiyan- Im a saiyan like goku"

Isn't what a better man would do

I nodded. "You're totally right. Thanks for putting my name down with yours by the way. I was worried that we wouldn't be able to work the same thing."

"AAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!" SPLASH!