Pranushka

Hi everyone.  First time Author here so please bear with me.The action in this story doesn't start until around 45 chapters, your criticisms are more than welcome as they'll help me improve. Thank you.

Great job! Loved reading it! Can't wait for the next part! The queen is really awesome in the story. She's the best character. She's super strong, smart, and kind. Every time she's there, the story gets better. She's really good at solving problems and she's always nice to everyone. The way she acts is really cool. She talks to others nicely and helps them when they need it. She's the most important person in the story. I'm excited to see what happens next and how she keeps helping everyone. The person who wrote the story did a great job making her. I'm looking forward to reading more about the queen in the next parts!

"Good ... morning ... Mrs ... "

The ice we skate is getting pretty thin

Welcome back author

"What!? you cant do that!" shout some of the students, "As you may know, the students here at UA get a lot of freedom, and so do the teachers, so yes, I can do that"

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     In the beginning, we were unhappy with this arrangement and complained constantly. However, this didn't even bother our managers who would usually freak out and overreact from the slightest of complaint.