Isekai Gundam

I truly enjoyed your novel, and I commend you for crafting such a grim and pale  undertone in your writing it significantly magnified the medieval settings. It’s rare to find an author who can evoke that kind of atmosphere so well. However, I had to drop the book a little before Chapter 100 due to a slight shift in the writing style.For example, the interaction between the Sphinx and the dragon felt somewhat off. I understand that you were likely adding some comic relief, but the choice of characters for this humor disrupted the tone for me. The dragon has been established as slow-witted, but the Sphinx, with its mysterious origins, felt out of place making playful jabs.Additionally, while the novel has a lot happening, it lacks a compelling force that keeps me craving more. There isn’t enough build-up in anticipation or suspense, and while the world is vast, the events so far barely make a dent in the grand geopolitical scale that has been shown.Power scaling also feels somewhat vague. A more structured approach, similar to well-written Eastern fantasy, could improve this—where no matter how strong the protagonist is, the reader always has a clear grasp of their standing in comparison to others. This would make battles more engaging, as it provides a sense of scale and progression.That being said, the novel is still an enjoyable experience. The only reason I dropped it is that I tend to chain-read the moment I dropped it i picked up a more appealing novel, and this story might be better appreciated at a more moderate, leisurely pace.P.S. If you haven’t uploaded your book on Chereads, you might want to check it out—someone else may have done so without permission.also I don't know if you changed it down the line but miaomiao saying miao after every sentence was off putting

so far good book enjoying it a lot hoping it continues ..

You'll never shine if you don't glow

Only shooting stars break the mold

and to top it 3½ cm long and sharp black fingernails

Yu Yan stormed down the stairs and the children snapped their heads towards the sound. Their face's paled as hey recognised Yu Yan. Yu Xiao lay balled up and looked battered.

"—Mrooooooo—"

" Why were you stalking me then?" She said with suspicion, her guard still up.