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Lol why does this novel have the Harem tag and No-Harem tag at the same time.

Really good read so far! The thing that stands out most for me in this book is the dialogue. The character designs are nice and all, but the dialogue is really fleshing out our characters, like Soujin, who is surprisingly spirited and driven and a little snarky, or Muffet, who threw me for a loop with her whole 'interaction' with Captain Blackhart. You get a feel of the fact that these characters are more than meets the eye.The action is good so far and I appreciate the immediate dive into Sword Magic and Mystcry. I hope the fact that Soujin is starting as a Captain won't hamper how we perceive power progression in the story (if that is something the author intends to explore).All in all great read

quick question how did you get 34k views in just 10 chapters because I have been writing stories too but no one has even commented

Sorry for dropping this reviewbut sorry if there are grammar errors and other issues with this bookI'll do well to improve moreand please corrections are allowed for improvement

Neha: 'I'm not going to.'😡

"You know," Xenovia said now, "for the fact that such famous people had been part of their organization, I am surprised that I have never heard of him. I mean, he is your leader, isn´t he?"

"Yeah, but I don't remember it."

"After this, I can finally go back.."