DxD: Lustful Ascension

it's good the mc is strong but not overpowered immediately he's growing extremely fast añd need more improvement in world building it's look like we don't know where it and what place he is but the story is good and side character feel alive keep improving

I haven't yet grasped some other elements. But the descriptions are so vivid. Like... I was immersed right away, losing the clear sense that I am reading nothing more than a novel. I also love the masterful progression the author gave Austin in the first few chapters. It's really worth a read! Well done!

This 5* is to encourage author to post more chapters daily. One notification for one chapter is not worth my time. Please consider. Thank you.

OMG what a pretty cover, please don't change it. Also, I'll support your work as much as I can, good luck author

What I heard next horrified me, three loud impacts could be heard then someone put a person in the driver's seat. I noticed that the man was already dead with a broken face. The man's face was so broken that you can't see any semblance of its former self anymore. Shaking with fear I cried again while noticing that footsteps coming closer to the other side of the car. 'Am I going to die?' I thought to myself as I saw a hand closing in the neck of the woman strangling. The woman looking at me as she tried to struggle from the grasp of the attacker. A snapping sound was heard and the woman lay still, her hold on me was slowly loosening but I can still feel her trying her best to hold me in her arms.

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb

They started getting out of the forest and gathered at the middle, They're at the middle of a forest with lush green surrounded them, where they're standing is a circular clear field with 20 feet radius. When they're at the middle of the circular field they started unpacking and checking what they packed. they have 12 notebooks, 4 ballpens, 3 water bottles, a bag of doritos, and 4 bags.

Time Machine