Delicate Concubine Bian

Buena historia hasta el capitulo que he leido actualmente 114.Seguire leyendo.-------------------------------------------------------------

Have you ever had high expectations and after reading a book had them exceeded? That's what just happened to me. Right from the first sentence, this book pulls you in and doesn't let go. Where should I start from? The main character?The author created a likeable MC that you can't help but root for. Kieran is the kind of person you'll want to have as a friend. Someone who embodies determination. It is said that evil thrives when good men do nothing. Kieran is one of those men who don't allow evil to thrive. A phrase that describes him can be found in game of thrones: "Unbowed, Unbent, Unbroken."But the side characters also shine. Frank, Miss Jane, the Dean, the Phoenix, all of them come alive in their own way to add color to the story.One of the things I'd also praise is the worldbuilding. Instead of dumping everything down our throat, the author reveals it slowly, piece by piece in a way that pulls you in.While chapter 15 was initially jarring for introducing such advanced tech, the more you read, the more it strangely fits. Kudos to the author.However, it would be a terrible disservice to just speak about all the good parts and neglect the bad parts.The only problem I had is the writing quality. And no, the grammar isn't bad. The only problem is that a lot of words are repeated a lot and it stands out. But even with that problem, the books still shines.While I've only read 20 chapters and no one knows what direction this book will take, I can confidently say that I'll keep reading.Keep up the good work, author. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

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writing quality, Story development, world background ground are all good

"But don't you worry about those toy, i not gonna use it for you but ...." His face come closely to me and he whispered, "Something better, let's we just start the party."

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid

"How long are you going to keep me tied up?" Ohanzee Otaktay sneered. Laini lowered her gaze when she was satisfied everything was calm; her face was cold and calculating despite her smile. Ohanzee shrank a little against the tree as a hand patted her on the shoulder and she sighed, turned away in annoyance and walked closer to Celeste, finally accepting the decision.

"We'll find others now and tell them to help mother"