Ascending Immortality

I only feel pity for the fl..till 60 parts the story is still where it is..keeping the distance between the leads..but the reason is not mentioned anywhere till now..ml knew only to use fl and torture her...but the author still tried to show he has feelings for fl..but i couldn't believe anyone would love fl this way..can't say much till the story proceeds .

Hello, author here if you have any suggestion as well as errors that need to be corrected feel free to leave a review or comment under the chapters ! Enjoy your read !

Here is my review about this novel.Character: So far I really like the characters in this story. The family dynamic between the characters, Thomas, Aurora, and Lila are healthy and support each other. I also like Aurora characters with each chapter opening bit by bit about her mysterious power. I even like Aurora power attracted some dangerous being like the shadows to hunt her down, making it more intense. Gideon as a villain is pretty fine with the creepy vibe especially with him. so obsesssed to hunt down Aurora and his creepy presence everytime he showed upWorldbuilding: So far the description of rhe world is quite beautiful and well detailed. I also like the author gave little bit of lore for the world. I do like to see more expansion about it.Pacing: So far the pacing of the plot is quite smooth and engaging too. Overall, if you like fantasy story with family dynamic, I recommended this book.

An absolute masterpiece that captivated me to start. The writing style is elegant and effortlessly engaging.I Potter head inside me is really excited to watch more upcoming chapters and I hope they release it soon!

it's good especially for beginners in bl

Boss Bradley jones:Whoever did that i want them killed by tommorow do you understand?...says boss coldly all capos replies'YES BOSS' and they walks out all of them had gloomy faces...

And honestly, Aiz couldn't really blame them...

Also from the world literature stage, Vladimir Nabokov's The Enchanter (17,575) can give students a feel for the author whose best known -- and most controversial -- book is Lolita. In fact, The Enchanter, written in 1939, is considered by some an early draft of his 1955 Lolita; however, Nabokov felt that the piece stood on its own and represented some of his best writing in Russian (he wrote Lolita in English). Dmitri, Nabokov's son, has translated The Enchanter into English. Like Lolita, only the subject matter of The Enchanter is racy; the text itself is quite tame.