Aden's Hearybreak

Shameless author here, reviewing my own work!Just a quick rundown of what to expect from Wudang’s Lost Sword Returns. I'm a new author, so your comments and reviews will help shape the story and improve my writing!This is a classic Murim story with a slight twist—if you're looking for an MC who abuses the system, this might not be for you. This tale is all about natural growth, deep connections with the world and its characters, and a hint of the game system genre for those who love it. But don’t worry, power fantasy and overpowered moments are still here, and yes, romance fans—I’ve got something for you too.Hope you enjoy the journey! Looking forward to your thoughts!

Love this book so far😍  Will there be more chapters dear author?  Please don’t drop the book🙏

It started off as a good story, but I feel like you kind of just skewed off from the original story before he went into the high class dungeon became completely crazy for a bit after that, I just feel like the story kind of was all over the place. I feel like if you rewrite it and stick to the story that you were doing before everything got out of hand it be a better story.

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Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

  The bright thing looks and feels like a flashlight I opened my eyes and I saw that my Door was opened every lights were closed and Bumalot sa buong katawan ko ang lamig at takot , nangangamba sa mga nangyayari..

Cloud was no stranger to hunting but from his past experience since he enter the black tide forest have made him a little unsure if he could manage it, Cloud took a moment trying to compose himself it surprised him how much hear was within him so much fear that even the idea of hunting left him feeling cold sweat. While Cloud was busy thinking a soft voice said "you will never be strong if you keep letting what happened in the past stop you from doing something dangerous, you should view your past failure as a learning experience and don't ever let fear stop you from doing something because you never truly know that you can do something until you do it".

"I'm sure we can get Irma and Kathy to come over—they'll be enough to cover us for the short term."