«Lost Ones»

read up to the 70s and dropped it, its not even bad as far as writing goes it just feels slow and i never get the feeling of wanting to read more or get hype about the main character, i feel like the initial part of the story had me hooked and everything after felt like a drag. So it's a good read if you don't mind that kind of story, just not for me

Holy Guacamole! This is awesome. I'm getting major Armageddon and and War of the Worlds vibes from this. I absolutely love it! It's a breath of fresh air honestly. Keep it up!!!!

When you write a bunch of chapters that was free to read then later on put it into another platform to have to pay to read them is disappointing. If you needed money you could have made paetron or another donation place.

Simply because I prefer the cloud girlfriend, as a possessive person, who would want to raise an AV Idol, to be used as a side dish? I for one, wouldn't want that, so yeah, I prefer the novel Raising A Cloud Girlfriend, that is much more cuter.

Very good story can not wait to read more, so keep it coming. Ya this a good stiry and i have to take up space so that i can post this and im surebthis has yet to reach the right amount of words to be post.

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