YOUTH || Liam Dunbar [1]

This story should change title to "Counting Mammoths".All you do is count mammoths in this novel.The fights are so ****ty and has no intensity at all."I have 100 more mammoths than you,so,i win.The MC is so boring as well.The villains are all the same just names differ.fck me this novel is boring

Why are all authors sadist and repetitive about MC , sad story + inflicting psychological and fizical abouse ,and lets not forget about revenge (killed clan/family) i don't see how this can be consider an original novel. Doesn't deserve its rating.

Gonna be honest, it is a meh type of story. It's "transmigrated" into Saitama with his powers so it is obviously that you should't expect anything serious from it. But, it stays strict to the true plot with little to no change which makes me question why even am I reading this. Sure, he gets power ups but... what is the point? He is already overpowered with Saitamas power. If it was "I transmigrated into saitama, don't have his power but obtain a overpower ability after doing quest" type of story it would be much better because then the plot would at least change a little bit more. My Fubuki ship went down the drain when you turned her into a transmigrator too. The grammar is average in my opinion too. Lines are striaght to the point, we lack some descriptions on some people or actions but overall it is way better than some chinese garbage. 3/5 seems like a good vote. For people who are bored and want to read something chill.

The plot follows the original work.Mc is no different from an overpowered extra who observes events.At some point, the story becomes unbearably boring.

is it just me or the plot are overused???if u follow the story from the beginning u will understand ehat i meant.it alway provoke mc u die...and it's being repeated in the whole story

Unique plot !! amazing work author, well done!! World background is catchy and clear. Characters are perfectly set. Keen to see what happens next

From what i’ve seen its really good. You should really continue with this.                                                                  

Interesting story. From the plot alone you can tell that it has potential to blossom into a great story.There were grammatical errors here and there as well as sentences where past tense should be used. But hey, we're only human. Aside from that, the story was easy to read and had a smooth flow.Keep up the good work. You'll do great.