The story is very interesting. Early on everything is black-and-white clear-cut but as the story progresses things get Blurred and itβs cool too see how the MC Interacts with the Characters
The book is interesting to read. And I love and I enjoyed it. It's kinda different with other transmigration story. So yeah read the story. You won't regret it because I didn't regret reading this book. ππππππππππ
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This novel has a ton of potential but sadly is held back by a ton of grammar issues that makes it look like it was translated by a machine. If the novel was rewritten with proper grammar and some of the sentences were revised to flow more easily then this would be a 5 star book. Another problem is that dialogue comes in the middle of paragraphs and is not separated when different people start talking making it hard to follow. The sex scenes are terrible and impossible to understand while having an unnecessary amount of cussing.
love it!!! more chapters please author! on another note though, I am hoping to see a possible coaching/management dynamic shift for the better in another team with our MC... atm it's only a small complaint. Still, it seems like he's constantly getting the short end of the stick, I only hope that doesn't become a long-term troupe.
it's a great book with an interesting premise, but I do think that it could sorely use an editor. it's never anything huge that I can't figure out, but theres definitely typos including the MC being called Seth not Elias quite a few times
She looked uncomfortable with his mother burying her face into her chest. She looked at him, curiously, and turned her head to the other side to study him. A chill went down his spine, when he realized that she acted more wild animal, than human.
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