The novella is good, but it contains something that irritates me endlessly in novellas: the author gives the main character incredible potential, but he doesn't use it fully. This is the most annoying thing one can see in a novella, and it's also the reason I lost interest and stopped reading.The main character often repeats that he needs to get stronger as soon as possible, and he has the opportunity to surpass all the cultivators on Earth in, well, a week or two at most. Here's how he can do it—two ways that the author, for one reason or another, doesn't use or ignores, explaining it with dumb reasons.The first way, of course, is to have s** with Xia Shenyi, but he foolishly doesn't do it because of some promise he made when he was naive. And now, even after realizing how much he needs power, he still uses this stupid and incredibly annoying excuse.The second way is something anyone can figure out after reading about his physique's abilities, and that is s** with virgins. With his money, looks, and strength, he could have s** with hundreds of girls in a week and raise his cultivation to the world's peak. And as for his seed allowing people to become cultivators? Who cares? Without techniques and help, these women wouldn't be able to become cultivators anyway. So, the only thing standing between him and power is his stupid restrictions, because of which, 100% someone close to him will suffer in the future.I'm not saying he should go out into the streets and find them one by one. He could have used a brothel, which could have made for an interesting storyline. He could have also used that sect of some flower people, whose master he saved in the ruins. There are plenty of opportunities, but they aren't being used.
I really like the practicality of this novel and the lowkeyness of the mc. Tho its update is not up to par its still worth it. The storyline is getting better im still hoping for more bcoz the chapters are still so little.
This is what I would call a great concept that was poorly executed. The idea of the story is great, the summary accurately portrays the idea thus drawing you in. But once reading it the interest quickly dies out. The Grammer is bad, no other way to put it. The character development is shallow next to non existent. Its rushed, no real connection formed between the reader and MC. Its more of a story u read to fulfill ur power trip fantasies. Reading it expecting anything else will disappoint u.
Decent wuxia novel. Kinda similar plot to every other novel, but has its quirks. Interesting in quite a few aspects. Character development and personality of mc is quite different from the rest of factory made novels. Unexpected twists and plot in unexpected times (which it should be). Pretty decent overall. Just a bit improvement needed in translation and Grammer. Pretty good quarantine read. Hope it continues.
I had high hopes for this fiction but it's a copy paste of other bad web novels.You'll find all the bad from other Chinese webnovels here.One dimensional protagonist.Stupid clan based society.Young masters.Zero world building.Reincarnation but with zero story or explanation.Etc.this fiction is repeated thousands of times in this site.Tl;Dr: It's another copy paste fiction with a western skin.
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