Okay, you're a legend at FPP. This story is amazing and you gotta keep going. I love the way it's written. It just shows the way you put the work into this, magnifico.
: I am loving the chapters you're posting bro. The world development is good and the characters are freaking amazing. I would like lots and lots of chapters in the future. It has limitless potential. Keep up the good work π
This review is up to Chapter 103.For any ******** fan of this novel, please just ignore/skip this review as it wouldn't suit your taste.The story was quite promising at the beginning that he got into the world. I did enjoy it. But things turned bad as new characters were gradually introduced.Firstly, the content was full of filler made by side characters with primal IQ that you would constantly wonder if they were homo sapients. The main character decision making was also repetitively bizarre and unrealistic. In many occasions, it would only make sense to me if these grown up men and women were substituted with middle school boys and girls. Their conflicts have similar level of significant and intelligence.It is not that I expected a perfectly rational characters. I do find making mistakes interesting and realistic. But repeating the stupidity is exclusive for idiots. The mc is becoming harder and harder for me to bear with. So I have decided to drop this.
I read this about 1 year ago and I must day Im disappointed. Not because the novel is bad, no. In fact I would say its amazing for the novels on webnovel. What Im disappointed in are the insane grammar and spelling errors in the novel. If they were to be fixed, I would read this regularly. The novel also has some odd things with techniques. I still dont fully understand the cloning technique, even after reading 150ish chapters. Having an auxilary chapter to explain techniques like this would be useful, because I had to wonder what he could do and couldnt without any answers. Finally, cliches. The novel has MANY. But, they arent in your face telling you how cool it is to be supreme etc. Its mainly for plot and story, so the MC, the main focus of the story, doesnt suffer from the usual bs that comes with all the cliches. It has potential to be amazing, but holds itself back due to its details.
Oh My God, this is amazing, it's so realistic and exciting. I need more chapters, finished the 299 chaps in like 2 days, I rlly loved this, my whole attention for 2 full days was devoted to this and I need more!!!
The thought and imagination put into this book is absolutely splendid! The characterS and the beasts were described meticulously. My favorite part was when Lucas and the humanoid mantis faced of each other. Looking forward to reading more chapters! :)
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