An interesting book, but sometimes incomprehensible, what the author wanted to say by some kind of action. The characters are written well, but the world as a whole is incomprehensible, and there is no clearly expressed plot.
It is best novel I read.
MC is good, story good, characters good, world good. It says Harem but it seems like a couple only and doesn't seem to change. I mind either path. But good to know which way story goes.
Some repeat of same description of green and red colors at different times for different things. But good writing.
also don't forget to have chapter of rest and normal life after fights. I think it would be good.
It is great. recommended.
All right so I honestly love the story as I love duel main character storys where we get TWO main characters for the price of one instead of some dumb male/female/AI System lead. For others looking at this and thinking is it good and do the tags correlate, uhhhh kinda? Theres a good bit of cultivation (basically what storys bout shocker) but I havent seen any R-18 or Harem stuff yet which I kinda apreciate. This story honestly feels like these two are kinda made for each other and other 3rd 4th and 5th wheel girl/guys just would be weird to me.
All in all real good cultivation story with lovely little protags who are probable psychopaths and we love them for it.
Fazit: Great read! Chapters are rather long (which I like). There are basically 2 MCs with funny dynamics between them. The writing quality (grammar and spelling) are good - things are easy to read. The cultivation speed is fast - so there are no "holdups". The world background good - interesting enough ;)
So once again - give it a try, there are many free chapters to get your own opinion!
To start with this story has a different way of going about things than most stories which isnt bad at all but being as light hearted as it has been it needs to either add a good amount of comedy or wit to carry it to betterment as only being lighthearted is horrible for a story in the long run.
The personalities of the the mc and the women are fleshed out enough and frankly much better than the majority of the other webnovel novels have, but its gotten to mushy and the way the self confidence or any behaviour is shown between them has become repeated and is just making the story weak at this point, at this point the main characters need to be treated as normal people and behave normally rather than this stuff.
The cultivation level jumping was already exaggerated and has since become just nonsense at this point since they got that chaos energy stuff, this has to been reduced at the divine realm to a normaler degree because rigjt now its just a pathetic joke the way theyre jumping entire realms. Just because every other novel makes the mc jump stages doesnt mean it has to be done and if it has to then certainly not like this.
To summarize not bad for a novel just with issues which need to be fixed asap to stop it from becoming worse.
Good morning Mr author I hope you are doing. I just wanted to say I love this book so please keep write. Don't mind me I am out of words so. Km km km mm km km kkkkkkkkkkk
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MC is good, story good, characters good, world good. It says Harem but it seems like a couple only and doesn't seem to change. I mind either path. But good to know which way story goes.
Some repeat of same description of green and red colors at different times for different things. But good writing.
also don't forget to have chapter of rest and normal life after fights. I think it would be good.
It is great. recommended.
Keep up the good work m8!!!
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All in all real good cultivation story with lovely little protags who are probable psychopaths and we love them for it.
So once again - give it a try, there are many free chapters to get your own opinion!
The personalities of the the mc and the women are fleshed out enough and frankly much better than the majority of the other webnovel novels have, but its gotten to mushy and the way the self confidence or any behaviour is shown between them has become repeated and is just making the story weak at this point, at this point the main characters need to be treated as normal people and behave normally rather than this stuff.
The cultivation level jumping was already exaggerated and has since become just nonsense at this point since they got that chaos energy stuff, this has to been reduced at the divine realm to a normaler degree because rigjt now its just a pathetic joke the way theyre jumping entire realms. Just because every other novel makes the mc jump stages doesnt mean it has to be done and if it has to then certainly not like this.
To summarize not bad for a novel just with issues which need to be fixed asap to stop it from becoming worse.
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