Yaxoc's Adventure: Act 10

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brain dead novel, utter garbage this the way power up/cheat works full of Bullsh it that anyone with AVG IQ would find hard to read and this totally illogical to extreme end.

I started this right when it came out on webnovel, and was surprised with how good it got.It's OK in the biggining, but as you continue the author does a good job of expanding the world and putting everything together, right until you get to where I am.AND THEN THEY STOPED TRANSLATING IT RIGHT WHEN IT WAS GETTING EPIC!!!So I recommend this book, but I wouldn't get too invested until it has a regular update schedule.

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Just visiting but I have nothing to say, by the way is this base on king's Avatar by bb? ................................... let just explore it

The only thing I think it's lacking right now is the mc is not very scheming, ruthless and cunning i mean if someone comes back from their death and get a second chance they still being pure is very low. I am not comparing here but I think you can take some hints from the novel  "Conquering the Novel" by "Enigma0" and then it will be one of the best novel.

I think the story is quite well thought of, the intro already have something happening and we are later brought into more drama. The pacing is quite good. The quality can be improved with some editing I believe, but the book, if done right have great potential. Did I say I really like the book Cover! It looks so nice!

This was pretty awesome for a short story. I would love to read a world based from this. Good job. Nice background and storyline. Fights could use a bit more gorey details but it didn't detract from the quality.