yandere fantasy

intriguing plot... want to read more

Amazing story really enojoyed reading!

Well, Really enjoying this novel. It is just that though it is completed in Chinese, but the English version feels like updating very slowly. Just hoping it will update more frequently.

Pretty standard garbage wuxia novel. I don’t think there is anything else expected of this novel except the standard harem troupe and the bad leveling.

I am definitely loving your novel. I hope that continue the novel and do not drop it. Just hoping that you release 1 chapter daily . I hope your story finds    success                                

Seriously how is this ranked so high? I mean I know my comment will be erased like all my previous comments on other novels but still.How is the MC even betrayed? The dude literally walked up and stabbed the guy in the chest like some cheater who paid off his opponent if anything I was happy that he was tricked as the guy is literally retarded and then he died? What?? What is this Sword Art online 2.0? The plot literally jumps from him dying to all of the sudden waking up in the past and he accepts it within seconds/minutes of waking up no problem. It then jumps to him solving all his family problems and ends up in game where it is suppose to be the first day of the game going live. Instead I don't know what the author was smoking but it feels like the game has been live for years as all of a sudden "elites" and guilds are popping out of nowhere with no real explanation on their backgrounds other than the characters being flat with no real character other than antagonizing the MC.Don't even get me started on the ridiculous 57000 exp required to level up to like 80% of level 2. I literally felt my balls hurt and want to smash my sexy laptop after reading this crap. 12 chapters in and I feel like this story is one of the worst pieces of crap I have ever seen. There are tons of stories better than this pile of crap ranked a lot lower and somehow this is near the top? Please if you are going to treat your readers as retards as least make it slightly believable Qidian.

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