Y/n Diaz, the new rookie

Good book! The start is somewhat plain but it has the perfect elements to hook readers. Give it a go, readers. The cute demon is a cutie, you'll love it!

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Gave it a 3 all around because it locks to early to really get a feel for the story. Also once i started reading the raw novel the names and a few other things are slightly different.

it's trash. I read this novel in mtlnovel.com couple months back. I liked the start but I dropped it even before reaching chapter 100. although I don't remember why but since it's something I dropped then it must have been trash.

Early in the development yet much better then 99,9% of the novels in here. Would recommend to anyone who likes the related tags of ‘game world’, ‘adventure’ and the others. Characters are individuals and not lifeless bag of filling. Writing quality is great and the story is far from the cliches past the first two chapters.

Okay so I really like Gourmet of Another world type stories and from the summary I thought that the mc would be feeding literal ghosts on the side, ya know, like a supernatural horror cooking thing in modern times. Spoiler. It’s not. Very sad. Anyway the story is pretty much placed in a Food Wars parody. Which is sort of cringe in my opinion. They use the same characters and stuff like the school and gourmet associations etc. The MC (a bit like Soma from Foodwars) has a small family restaurant run by his gramps- except the old man literally didn’t teach him how to cook until like a day after he got his cooking system. The cooking system is pretty straightforward- be the best- and it seems a lot more versatile and useful than some other systems but not too OP. Unlike Food Wars MC doesn’t want to go to the fancy cook school and just wants to run the restaurant. I quite like MC’s personality which is far more active than Bu Fang’s from Gourmet of Another World. He seems more positive and it’s clear that he’s quite hardworking. I’ve read more than I thought I would because I don’t mind seeing his journey as a chef but... the Food Wars references which I thought was a fun easter egg at first became a full blown thing and I don’t know, it’s like meh to me. I’ll keep it around 4* since the pacing isn’t bad, the mc is like able enough, the cooking description is very good and if you can get over the food war thing overall it’s a good read to pass the time....I still want a supernatural cooking story in the modern world tho QAQ

A good start for another gaming fic.Grammar has minimal errors. Dialogue feels organic and prose flows natural. World building and characters are well flesged out as well.Keep on writing 👍

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