Welcome!Don't get fooled by the title, this is a Slice of Life story with a lot of worldbuilding and lore, and only WHOLESOME lewd chapters with lots of cute demi-human and monster girls. Sometimes a little adventuring too. Expect a lot of cute character interactions and development. For those who still are worried about their feelings getting potentially hurt, check the linked image, but be aware that it contains spoilers.No NTR, Rape or other bad stuff. Only MC's sexual escapades are being visually described!
Alright this is actually a decent fanfic. No system, no ludicrous wish fulfilment nonsense.There are a few flaws though. The first is that you obviously do not proofread. The second is that your attention to standard writing rules is half assed : You do not start your sentences with capitals, you write numbers with symbols instead of letters. Lastly, sometimes it gets a little too much with other’s reaction of the main character deeds. Many times I have found myself half sighing/cringing when I read Hiruzen thinking "how is he this good oh my god 🥵🥵". No. He is Hiruzen Sarutobi, he has seen Jounin level seven year-old before and all kind of prodigees through his decades of kagedom. Get that fixed, and your story will level up in quality greatly. I wish you the best !
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