World of The Apex

Since my previous review was deleted and I woke up like 5 minutes ago I will keep this short and simple. Characters: Entertaining and fleshed out. Chapter length: Just right. Story progression: A bit slow but completely fine. Thank you for letting me know that my previous review got deleted author sama. I highly recommend to new readers.

This story is unputdownable. It's fascinating, how Alexander is so obsessed with reading mystery/horror novels, and how he ends up buying that novel. My favorite part is when he has to open the book and use a certain substance with the fountain pen to open it, I thought that part was very creative and I could really imagine it and feel grossed out as I read through that part of opening the book.It's creepy and filled with horrific moments especially as Alexander sort of transmigrates, and that's what I call a good horror book if it gives off that vibe and you're able to really find the lines between fantasy and reality. Well done! I will only take off half a star for some writing quality problems, such as the wrong word choice, or small errors/typos.

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The story is fun to read. The writing quality is good, smooth and detailed. The Fl's personality is likable and the other characters too. good work.

the weights he had in his body had opened his skin with it staining his training clothes with the occasional blood that came out of the open wounds in his body.

"Jangan sampai orang lain tahu."

"This formation will be more offensive but the defense can be adjusted if the Mages and Rangers help with defending when things go wrong." Gary finished.

Looks nice based on the first initial chapters, really looking forward to continuing it