World End: The Successor's Contract

Nice start. The book has potential. There are some errors here and there but it is readable. Need a little bit of rereading and this will become a masterpiece. Has high potential. Explain a little more power level and methods to obtain it. That's all. waiting for more chapters.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

well done author but update so we can enjoy

Is this book already dropped or are you gonna update it after some time...
can't wait to read more it is somewhat new concept [img=gift]

I don't know what to say. The story is well written and expressed feelings in it. The world building is nice. I love the author explaining a character's appearance.  It got me hooked instantly.

I like the story the premise is great but the first few chapters need to be reread for grammar errors and there are times where a better use of word choice is best. Character’s are suddenly introduced and there are quite a few in the first few chapters. Interacts are great and fights are descriptive. But I can’t really visualize them well enough. The world had many things I want to know and would wish they were described in more detail. Possibly describe the village, city, buildings, ground, and air.

Hello, I am here to review this. Honestly, I am gonna recommend this one. While I was reading I wanted to tell you something.

At first, I noticed that in the first chapter, you have add a author's notice in the first chapter. But you don't have to do it there  You have a section to add author's thought. When you write choose that option and write your notices there. So it won,t bother to the story.

I noticed a few mistakes with Pnctual marks. But it's not that remarkable. So you can be more careful...

Anyways, The plot is flowing smoothly and I think the story will get more and more better in the future. So recommended!


Keep going author,

The writing is okay, there are some grammar mistakes as well as misplaced and misspelled words, even in the synopsis. But this can be edited and fixed easily. The plot seems interesting, however, it seemed a bit too fast-paced, not to mention, the storytelling was honestly mid. The buildups were not tense because of this. The introduction of the Mc was also a little lackluster and boring, I see what you were trying to do but the execution wasn’t good. All in all, the novel isn’t bad, it’s easy to tell your a inexperienced but I’m sure with the right amount of time you could deform this and make it much better.