A fiction about a football manager trying to resurrect a fallen football giant,Nottingham Forest. This book about Tony Dunn/ Tony Twain is really relaxing to read as far as I remembered. Characters development is kinda okay. Plot Twists and imaginary players blended well with well known football stars. MC is really lovable, a fun guy. Most of the plots are intense and interesting. (MC is reincarnated to the past btw)At first,MC didn't know anything about actually managing club other than former experience of the host body and his FM experience .But he knows one thing. About which players will be stars in the futures!
Overall, I like the structure of this story and I think it has potential, but I am disappointed with the slower pace. Maybe the novel will pick up the pace once a "Tribe" is formed between the various characters. Author definitely seems like they have a direction and the main cast all have some personality instead of one dimensional characteristics. Good:-game seems interesting-blend of real world and video game which gives life to characters and makes the world seem more real-No line up of jade beauties trying to get into MC's pants just cause he has a pulse [as of latest chapter, 86]-MC is not a money obsessed like a lot of video game genre MCs on this siteBad:-I am current through chapter 86 and there has been no kingdom building, no romance, and no e-sports. The novel is interesting though it seems more like a cultivation novel where almost all of the focus is on the main character being a "trash" with a cute little sister type character doing a VERY long training montage with stat increases instead of changes in realms.-way too much early focus on press conferences and other news segments that have little story relevance [at least as of chapter 86]-characters responding to the smallest conflict between each other as "do they hate me?" if you have been friends and close for over a decade and the one little thing makes you think that they hate you, that is just rough.-There are some grammar errors though nothing that makes it impossible to understand what is going on in the story.
This story would be good if it was properly edited. I understand why other reviews call it a MTL, i.g. it is barely readable. I understand how it may be unique, but consider My German Empire and Out of Space. These novels do this concept way better.
You probably has to break your sentences to a few paragraphs so the pace of the story is good . Long sentences , even if your grammar is good , might bore your readers .
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Nice one.This book has a beautiful world background and is filled with thrilling chapters, judging from the few I've read.However, a little bit of editing needs to be done to give the book a good writing quality.
I'm loving the development of the story, and when will Star Dragons be released again?I really like Damián's character. But I also love Pierre Durand's dramatic development.
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