without the grace of god

Has great potential, I wish the author luck in his work with God’s blessings. Review: going to be doing this in WebNovel structure so be lenient with me.Writing Quality:The writing quality is good, I have yet to notice any grammar mistakes or misplacement of words. The might be some, but it’s not something that would impact your reading flow. Update:The book updates often with the author having to take a break to deal with real life situations but who are we to judge. It could be better in my opinion but I would prefer quality over rushed work. Story development:The story itself is interesting, with an evil/rational mc who was placed in a world that’s seems to be primordial history with the usual Gods,dwarf,elves and etc but what makes this good is how the characters actually seems decently strong and realistic. Like at one point, a god notice the mc and went to kill him himself. But that’s to much spoilers so I won’t go into detail, so read it yourself and I tell you, won’t regret it. I do have to state that the MC plot cheat would be a dues ex-machine, meaning that a higher power would come in to save the day but this high power is also using the mc to develop himself. Character design: The author took inspiration from a lot of novels, some popular and well known while others not so much. I’ll be honest when I say the mc gives me the custom demon vibes with his thinking and decisions. Although, I do believe that some stuff could’ve been done better like his cautiousness, we can just chuck it up to his inner animalistic instincts. This is a non-human novel with the mc looking like the cover with every evolution (not sure if the author changed it in the future). I don’t expect any romance and I doubt the would be so don’t worry about it impacting the reading. World background: As I said before, the story seemed to be placed in a primordial historical world, with titans falling and rising to god hood, with Gods birthing their own creations. I have not read a lot of the novel with paying chapters coming in early, but from what I’ve read so far, the world seems to be big, with a lot of dimensions and domains of different God and stuff.

I came for the male lead but stayed for the plot. With every chapter, you can see Lorelei building her own character and becoming mentally stronger, especially with the male lead’s guidance. The story is so beautiful and well-written that I can’t wait for the next chapters to be released.

Hi fellow author!I’ve really enjoyed seeing where you’ve taken this so far. Your story is absolutely captivating, and I’m eager to see what comes next. Seriously, don’t give up—I’m here to keep your spirits up! Not that you need it, but hey, good job! I’m loving every bit of it so far. Especially the deck of cards thing thats definitely a nice touchOh, and if you have a moment, could you check out my book? It’s a fantasy adventure titled Bellator: Rising. The story follows a hero’s journey in a world I’ve meticulously crafted from the ground up. You’ll discover a unique mana system, intriguing species, various countries, and rich cultures, each with their own religions and laws.This is my first book, and I’m genuinely eager to get some feedback. Whether you’re an experienced writer or just a fan of fantasy, your insights could really help me improve. I’m bracing myself for any critique, no matter how brutal, so let it rip! Your honest opinions would be invaluable.Thanks so much for considering giving it a read.Best,IkarisP.S. Your feedback would mean the world to me!

I wasn't into a system theme, but the author made me. Loved how descriptive his writing skills are! I don't know if it's his writing or my imagination has gotten better, but damn! it didn't feel anything like reading a book. It felt like watching a movie. Hats off to the author for this one!!