I have read about 260 chapters now in 1,5 weeks, I feel like the Story is ruined at the point when almond leaves the first layer early, it was no smooth transition and i am absolutely dissapointed, I had high hopes to have found a gem here, but I didnt. I like the wriring a lot and the quality of your chapters is top, so is your Charakter Design and the Logic which you introduced into your World, but as mentioned in my point of view you Ruined your own pace and for me the pace of the Story which is why I must give a low value to your book.I hope in your next book you will not Do the Same mistake again and I am looking forward to your future works.
You published a different book in the same chapter and copied the chapter over again… what the heck am I unlocking here. I never used to have issues like this with this app and these have happened over and over again with repetitive chapters but never a whole new different book accidentally dropped in the chapter. And IF INFACT IT IS PART OF THE STORY there needed to be more transition the He Jiangling was after Mei Xi’er picked up a taxi. Don’t make it seem like there isn’t a break in story content!
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