Amazing world and detail. Not your generic type novel it actually has feelings and every character introduce is unique. To be honest it is most likely the best novel I've ever read in my life time.
So, starting with the beginning of the novel, I will be straight with you, it was a TOTAL mess. Pandamonium, whatever you'd like to call it. It was a ball of confusion, and I think both the translator, and the writer were working on what to call things. Though I thought I would invest some more time in, simply because I was running out of female mc characters to read about.The core of the story is that this girl is somewhat a background character, dies, get's reincarnated as a beautiful rich girl. Yet she has the ability to enter a "dimensional gate" that allows her to enter the stories (light novels or manga) and choose a character to possess and control completely to her whims as well as make it gain a bunch of abilities. When she develops that character to become a super mega famous memorable character, she is rewarded with a "character card" and gains the ability of the character she molded.At it's core, I thought it was a pretty interesting concept after I dug through the mess of the first couple of chapters. In fact, I was thinking of giving it a DECENT review. however, there are a couple of core concepts that I have problems with.First, the author has the mc be described as super beautiful and lazy (an attempt at gap moe or something)? But that honestly doesn't add anything to the character. There is something called procrastination, but at this point it's honestly kind of annoying the way she's so lazy. The initial portrayal of her character is quite strange. Contradictory. She's lazy towards studying, yet she tries to make a character that can help her study, Xu Jing, and gain her "passion for learning". That's contradictory from the initial impression I got from her, that she simply didn't really care about anything going on in her life. The fact there isn't anything to her except for the fact that hey she has her ability, she's pretty, and lazy, there is no good interaction that develops the character herself. We see Xu Jing developed decently, but I feel like Zhao Youyue, the mc, is like a hazy figure becoming other figures, with no distinct value in my mind.Second, What the heck is with these references? The author constantly throws in real authors of manga's and drags in qidian's name so often it sometimes feels like a walking advertisement.Third, How did Youyue find out about the niches to her ability? It wasn't like a manual dropped out of the sky with her, teaching her how to use her ability, as you could see from the disastrous first shot. All of a sudden, with no explanation, Youyue finds out that if she makes her character famous, she can gain it's abilities. Where the heck did that come from?Fourth, the setting development is trash. i hate to say it, but honestly the only thing we ever see in Youyue's world is the school, and her road. Her bedroom is hazily described but there simply is not a proper setting. It's as if the author grabbed a couple character ideas and plopped them in a classroom, with no real development of how the society runs. Not everyone lives that life and can relate that easily. Although the main world setting is super vague, and the mcs life confined to a classroom and her home, I won't say this can't be developed. It is a problem that we are this far along and nothing changed. Fifth, the setting in the dimensional gate thing. It's incredibly unclear how the world is structure, is it like living in real life? is it like transporting between hazy spots in a void with several settings floating around. does she teleport between scenes. Though there are time gaps in these substories, they are not properly explained in the novel. For example, Xu Jing is transported through time to different events and it's super unclear what genuinely occurs from Youyue's perspective.Sixth, what made me give up on this novel and decide to drop it. The most recent chapter. Youyue specifically says that in order to gain another ability, one must sacrifice the character card. Albeit how weird that is, my main problem is that she CHOOSES TO GO INTO THE DREAM LAND AGAIN. It would make sense if there was a valid reason, as in order to gain the ability, she would have to sacrifice her Xu Jing card, but there wasn't. She felt bored, and re-entered the world. WHY? She likes Xu Jing's card. Why would she enter the world, put in the work, without even deciding whether she would want that new card afterwards? It simply doesn't make any sense. The story is now unbalanced with it being overwhelmingly about Youyue's life in the dream land (or whatever it's called). We don't get proper development of the character itself. This is when I was hit with the realization that this story would pretty much become a collection of short stories with a *****, lazy narrator. Furthermore, this process would just repeat until the author chooses to cut the story.it's the kind of story where I feel like the author is dumping un-fleshed to make a mixing pot, and it makes me feel like while there was an initial inspiration, that it would simply become a repetitive chore to read. Thus I leave this story and move on.
I like the story,the system isn't annoying and the MC isn't annoying so that's also nice. I like the idea behind the story as well,I don't see many sect building novels as well made as this one. Hope the author keeps up the good work!
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I really like system novels, and this one really catches my interest. so far, it is climbing up my own rankings of books i keep an eye on for the latest chapter. keep up the good work and please keep the chapters coming.
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