Whisper of Desire

"Let's go to the mansion, I still want to talk to you Komuro-kun and also with your friends" - said Souichiro as he went to his home with his wife.

Insoo: So, about that favour?

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

hidden gem cultivation story; everyone that likes cultivation novels will love this one. This story has a slower much gentler pace which lets you understand the mc and his personality more which i really appreciate especially because most stories on webnovel are rather fast paced and only describe situations on the surface level.Definitely give this novel a try!!!!

a hidden gem how this story is buried here idk, but im happy finding this novel. hope author keep updating

first of all african mc is something new to me even with the hunter type of story. keep it up so i can enjoy reading more.

I am sorry I didn't leave a full star review.But it's only the beginning so this was as high as I could go. I came from your tiktok video. I honestly really liked the idea of The Fallen Empire so I wanted to ask if you would continue that.Also if you could,please give my works a chance. It would be nice to know another writer is reading and you can maybe tell me where I went wrong and stuff.Your biggest hurdle is probably dialogue. Something I also struggle with. Atleast I saw that was the case with the four chapters I have read up until now.It would be better if each and every dialogue was unique to that person,don't always use the same tone,use descriptions to enhance the experience and feeling you can get from dialogue. Don't be afraid to use cliches as long as you don't fully rely on them. Pick a strong characteristic of your novel and run with it until the end.That's all.I am sorry I couldn't give any power stones since I ran out. I will give some tomorrow.