The story is quite good. The grammar of course could be better,but still,it's ok. Though,I would have preferred you you used real players, and not made up ones. Overall,it's nice.
Such a rip-off of saiki kusuo..Boring.. (just read earlier chapter.. but yeah, drop it)So much expectation, so much let down..Don't get me wrong, i give low overall rate not just because blantant copy, i find saiki kusuo is boring too..Overall, don't expect much..
don't be like those people who don't read because of a bad review the only reason this has a bad review is because of their dumb reason some say he is stupid(he is very smart) with his dumb decision(every action has a reason) I have caught up with this novel and ask anything you want I will answer all of it.Those low reviews are written by dumb mother f****R everything they said is wrong don't be mislead by them.
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I have no clue what I'm reading 90% of the time. you seem to be trying so hard to make this seem like an original story.... but it's a fan fic, simple as that, so making it so confusing and convoluted. no need for some overly complex grand design. 22 chapters in and the story has barley anything to do with douluo. of your going to make a douluo fanfic then do that. this isn't your original world stop making it so complex as if this was an original story. ruins the whole purpose of it being a fanfic. otherwise take out the douluo stuff, and make an original world and sick with it, or get rid of the weird af system and multiple reincarnators and trial candidates or what ever the heck is going on here. it just doesn't work. fanfics are ment to use original works and twist it around, while your trying to make an original work and add other non original stuff into it.
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