When the ice melts (girlxgirl) [complete]

Dude someone humiliated,raped and tortured your woman in public and you pay him an absi4d amount of money for it. Mc is got to be the most idiotic mf i ever met in my life. Why not take that money and go to some of the big gun so they just off your enemy. Author you sure you are thinking straight?

how many total chapters are there in this novel...???????btw I love this novel...this is a perfect novel for fantasy and cultivation also thera are many plots and twists in this novel ...I am totally amazed while reading it

Way too much irrelevant info dump that doesn’t relate to the MC or anyone at all, the MC is a hypocrite and stupid, he has all the advantages that’s possible the ability to level up infinitely reaching a realm where he can pinch the strongest gods with a finger but he doesn’t like grinding thus he doesn’t do it, i mean grind a little exp won’t hurt, the mc wants to create flying city just because leyling in warlock of the magus world did, ahe creates it and abandones it creating it for the sole reason of plot so that the other gods have a reason to target him absolutely ridiculous, he spent all his time strategizing early on about what legendary class to take after shadowdancer, guess what end of novel he merely lvls up rouge to lvl 20 ,shadowdancer lvl10 without advancing to specialized legendary class , early on he said he wanted to advance to shadowmaster or other legendary specialized classes but author forgot about class lvl ups midway through focusing on divinity, only at the end of the novel he lvld him up +20 classes at once without advancing, 10wizard and 20 arcanist, no archmage no grandarcanist and no battlemage which are classes the author spent tens of chapters just explaining about how good they are but suddenly forgot to advance to them for no apparent reason, the mc said once he reach total lvl 20 caster he will advance to grandarcanist or battlemage but because author forgot about classes entirely at the end he simply added 10 more lvls to arcanist instead of advancing it for a stronger class, finishing this novel with a medicore MC who only boasts about how good he is but never took advantage of his previous knowledge except once at start of novel and thats it, he have the ability to lvl up with murder but doesn’t use it unless forced to by plot, has the opportunity to become strongest person/god but doesn’t take it afraid of being the strongest, also its never explained what happens to his children , or how he got into this world nor why, over a thousand chapters of nonesense just plain info dump that’s ridiculous, the author always forgetting what he wrote changing the story midway without any prior notice(clearly forgets what he wrote previously) but doesn’t bother to correct it or anything but just rolls with it. I only rated it so highly because of he translation stability which I appreciate but other than that its bad

this a bit bland but the concept is refreshing just like isekai anime

I want to start by saying that this is purely criticism from a objective perspective and in no way should be taken personally by the author.With that said the grammar and writing quality is abysmal and needs more work than I could believe possible for a novel with so many chapters and power stones. While the story and world are fine the grammar and English level I think are beyond savaging but I hope that I am proven wrong in the future by a whole team of editors.

I liked the plot, it gives us the glimpse of the horrible effects of war, causing families to torn apart and the trauma that the young childen has to go through. Although, I think the paragraphs are too long, some readers tend to skip long chaps. Also, I got lost sometimes in the middle of dialogue tags but overall the story has feels to it. Lastly, I kind of wanting to know how the two brothers cope up in those 5 years after losing their father. This is a good read! 👏🏻

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I like that despite the fast pacing of the first few chapters of Mael Growing up, you still keep it realistic. The MC is strong and talented which amazed his parents, but his genius still can't easily beat experience during the coming of age chapters when fighting his father.This is a good story, and there's a lot of chapter which I can spend a lot of time to read during my free time!!